The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The two maps depict the
road
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access to a city hospital in 2007 and after its renovation in 2010.
Overall
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, a new car park, bus station and two roundabouts had been added
while
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,
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the ring
road
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and the hospital
road
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remained
the
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unchanged.
Initially
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, a city
road
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was located from east to west
of
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the map. A hospital
road
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was branching
of
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it and connected it to the ring
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which was around the hospital, encapsulating it. Three bus stops were situated on either
side
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of the hospital
road
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and a car park for the staff and public was located near the right one. In 2010, two roundabouts had been added on either
side
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of the hospital
road
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. The old bus stops had been removed and a new one had been constructed on the left
side
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of the hospital
road
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which had been connected to each roundabout through a
side
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road
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. The old car park had remained unchanged for the staff
while
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,
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a new one had been built on the right
side
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of the hospital for public use. The city hospital and the ring
road
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stayed the same.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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