The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy ni 20 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show the information of different
ages
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of the populations of
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yemen
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Yemen
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an
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and
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italy
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Italy
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in
2000s
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the 2000s
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and the projections for 2050.
Overall
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,it can be seen
can seen
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that
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the number of
ages
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in
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this
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these
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two country similar in age 15-59 years. In
this
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essay ,
i
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I
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will Summarise the
ages
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of the populations of
Yemen
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and
italy
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Italy
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and make comparisons between these countries. In detail,the
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precentage
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percentage
of youth has increased in
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yemen
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Yemen
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at
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in
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2025 years.
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,
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apply
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the
ages
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from childhood became less
this
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year,
also
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show
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precentage
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percentage
tha
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the
ages
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of the elderly has become more compared to the year 2000.
On the other hand
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,the
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precentage
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percentage
shows elderly people in
italy
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Italy
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increased compared
on
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to
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the
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apply
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yemen
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in large numbers.
while
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,
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apply
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the
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precentage
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percentage
of young people
is
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will be
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low in 2025.
According to
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what
shown
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is shown
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in
this
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charts
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chart
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precentage
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percentage
of childhood will
be increased
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increase
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in the future but it is considered dangerous
due to
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the poor living conditions in
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yemen
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Yemen
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these years.It is preferable that
it
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apply
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italy
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Italy
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pay more attention to the youth age
due to
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the population increase of the age group 15-59.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, yemen, precentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • young population
  • mature population
  • aging society
  • demographic shift
  • proportion
  • dominant
  • balanced distribution
  • projected increase
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