The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the
amount
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number
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of
visitors
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in
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to
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a certain Caribbean
island
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between
years
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the years
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2010 and 2017. The
island
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enjoyed a significant increase in tourism within these 8 years.
Furthermore
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, it can be seen that even though staying on the
island
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was more popular until 2015,
traveler
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travelers
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slowly opted for staying
in
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on
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the
cruise
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ships more. The popularity of the
island
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increased a huge amount. It reached 3.5
million
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guests in 2017 compared to 1
million
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visitors
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in 2010. 2010 to 2012 it saw a steady increase
while
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from 2012 to 2016 the flow fluctuated, but it saw a very steep increase of half a
million
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in the time period between 2016 to 2017. With around 0.75
million
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visitors
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the
island
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accommodation was more popular among
visitors
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than
cruise
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accommodation (0.25
million
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).
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However
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after both of the settlements
seeing
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saw
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ups and downs, they reached the same level
at
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in
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the middle of 2015, both reaching 1.4
million
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visitors
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. After
that
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that,
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we can see travellers preferred
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cruise
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cruising
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more than
island
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stay.
At
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In
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year
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the year
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2017
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2017,
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the
cruise
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and
island
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stay rose to 2
million
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and 1.5
million
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respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, cruise, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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