You have a friend who lives in a different country. You will organise a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe. Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing. In your letter, • tell your friend about the party • ask for the recipe • explain why you need the recipe from his/her country
Dear Neha,
I'm happy to announce that my birthday
party
is coming soon.
The Use synonyms
party
is scheduled for Use synonyms
18th
of July, which is Sunday, and Correct article usage
the 18th
venue
Correct article usage
the venue
is
already Verb problem
has
decided
for it. If you remember, in the centre of our city, there was a large banquet hall, which I thought to book, Verb problem
been decided
also
it has a capacity to accommodate Linking Words
for
almost 50 to 70 guests for a Change preposition
apply
party
.
Even though the Use synonyms
menue
consists of a wide variety of foods and cocktails but I'm really interested in the Correct your spelling
menu
Use synonyms
recpie
of a mac cheese burger, which I enjoyed during my Correct your spelling
recipe
last
visit to your country . As far as I Linking Words
remember
it was a Punctuation problem
remember,
mexican
restaurant, located near Fix capitalization
Mexican
to
your house, where I had Change preposition
apply
this
mouthwatering dish. The taste of the pasta with sauce and beef was exceptionally good.
I really need Linking Words
this
Linking Words
Use synonyms
recpie
on an urgent basis as my birthday Correct your spelling
recipe
party
is approaching soon, Use synonyms
also
I need Linking Words
sometime
to learn and experiment Use the right word
some time
it
at home before serving it to my guests. The main reason why I want Change preposition
with it
this
Linking Words
Use synonyms
recpie
as some of my guests are from Mexico Correct your spelling
recipe
and
our current Punctuation problem
, and
menue
doesn't have any Correct your spelling
menu
non vegetarian
dish Use the right word
non-vegetarian
especially
for those people who prefer Punctuation problem
, especially
eat
meat.
I look forward to your prompt response, and I wish I could meet you at my birthday Verb problem
to eat
party
. Use synonyms
Also
, I would be very thankful to you if you Linking Words
can
arrange a Wrong verb form
could
Use synonyms
recpie
for me.
Regards,
Amanjot KaurCorrect your spelling
recipe
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task achievement
Make sure to check spelling and grammar. For example, 'recpie' should be 'recipe.'
coherence and cohesion
Use paragraphs clearly to separate different ideas. Each paragraph should focus on one main point.
coherence and cohesion
Include a warm closing line, like 'I hope to see you soon!' to make the letter more friendly.
task achievement
You included details about the party, like the date and venue, which is great!
task achievement
You expressed your need for the recipe clearly, which helps understand your request.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite