“Many people say that technology has made our lives easier, but others believe it has created more problems than it has solved.” Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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would make our lives easier,
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others believed problems would be more complex to solve. I would definitely support the technology could be very helpful and solve our problems
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freelance work. Technology these days is very helpful for us. Not only does it have a lot of functions to do our job like a robot that helps clean our house, but
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tech makes our tasks easier and our problems less difficult than before
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example, Canva helps us build our design tasks very easily.
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, gadget has a lot of features,
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can help us get creative with developing apps
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as sketch, arts, and others to build our gift in the arts.
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, Artificial Intelligence has jumped into an assist to help humans daily lives.
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a daily planner.
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automation has been impactful for our daily
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, it could have a bad impact on our
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and activities, we will
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lazy
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not want to think and research wisely.
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, our data is not safe anymore, because of the level of applied science, it could make hackers or data thieves can easily get their personal information.
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, Technology has a great impact on our lives, but it
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has a bad influence on people who do not careful of use gadgets wisely
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AI is part of our daily activity, we must keep our info safe and still verify the data.
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Make sure your introduction clearly states both views and your opinion.
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Use clear paragraphs for each main point to improve organization.
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Try to give more details and examples to support your points.
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You provided interesting examples of technology like Canva and AI.
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Your essay presents a clear opinion that technology helps us but also has downsides.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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