Some people believe that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communications has had a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills.

There is a view that many
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computers and
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to talk to each other. Some
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think
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is bad for young
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’s reading and writing skills.
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some
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oppose
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notion, I personally argue in favour.
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with, many young
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do not read books anymore. They spend more time on social media or watching videos on their
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, their reading skill become poor. They are not used to reading long texts or understanding difficult words.
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, young
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use
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phones
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and computers mostly for chatting or texting. When they do
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, they often
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short words and emojis.
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, they write “u”
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of “you” and “lol”
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of full sentences.
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makes their writing worse because they don’t practise using correct grammar or spelling.
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, some
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say that technology helps young
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write and read more because they
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it for emails, messages, or reading news. But I think these are not enough. Most young
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use
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phones
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for fun, not for learning. Especially
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youngsters spend lots of time on social media
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as Instagram, Facebook , etc. Because of that, their logical thinking has declined. In conclusion, I believe that too much
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of mobile
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and computers for communication is bad for young
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’s reading and writing. They need to read books and write more in the correct way.
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, when they communicate a lot
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face-to-face, their communication skills will grow.

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