Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified? Are there any alternatives to animal experiments?

Experimentation on
animals
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is debatable for
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. Some
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think that it is bad and should be
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outlawed
.
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, other
people
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believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. There
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different views about
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issue.
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people
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people's
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notions about the justification of experimentation on
animals
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and
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the alternative solution. First of all, some
people
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think that doing observation using
animals
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can be justified. The research can be done
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the fact that it has
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a term
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and
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conditon
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condition
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People
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argue that the regulation usually forbids the observer
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from disturbing
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the
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apply
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animal rights,
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, the researcher is not allowed to
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cause
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animals
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feel
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exaggerate pain. Some
people
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believe that there are some rules to limit the
experiment
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which generates too
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drawbacks to
animals
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.
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,
others
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other
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people
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have different
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opinions
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. They think that there is an alternative to avoid using
animals
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in experimentation. In
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technology
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era, some research that
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uses
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animals
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as an attempt, actually can be demolished by
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.
People
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believe that some
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experiment
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experiments
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can be done
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a
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modern
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. To illustrate,
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researchers
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can observe the effect of the chemical product by laboratory
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checks
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To sum up
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, there are two different opinions in the community about doing
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experiment
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experiments
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on
animals
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. Some of them do not agree with that kind of
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,
while
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others agree with that notion. Some
people
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agree
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the regulation is strict and still consider animal rights.
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, the others disagree with that idea
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the current
technology
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is able to remove it.

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task achievement
Make sure to clearly state your opinion on the topic in the introduction. This helps the reader understand your position right away.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use more simple linking words to connect your ideas clearly. For example, use 'firstly', 'secondly', and 'finally' to show the order of your points.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples to support your points. For instance, mention specific technologies that can replace animal testing. This makes your argument stronger.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure that your sentences flow smoothly from one idea to the next. This helps the reader follow your argument easily.
task achievement
You've presented both sides of the argument, which is good for a balanced discussion.
coherence and cohesion
Your conclusion summarizes the main points well and gives a clear ending to your essay.

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