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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart
dipicts
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depicts
 the location of
dance
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classes
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the
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that the
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 youth in an Australian town are participating
recently
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in recently
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, and the bar chart illustrates the type of
the
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apply
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dance
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classes
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 they are taking.
Overall
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, one location is particularly prevalent among these young people,
while
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 the other three places experience less but similar popularity.
Moreover
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, people from
two
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the two
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 age groups indicate distinct interests toward two of
three
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the three
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 categories of
classes
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. Delving into the specifics, it is evident that approximately half of the
students
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 are taking dancing lessons at private studios, standing as the highest proportion. Notably, only half as
much
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many
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students
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 are joining the
dance
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classes
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 in school halls(24%). As for the young participants in college-based studios, a percentage of 10% is recorded in
this
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 town. Moving on to the categories of
classes
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, there are exactly 600 ballet
students
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 aged from 11 to 16, which is double the number of
students
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 under 11.
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, merely 300 children from the larger age group are engaging in modern
dance
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, roughly 220
less
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fewer
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 than the other group. What's more, similar interests can be seen for tap
dance
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, where a number of around 430 is registered for both groups.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, classes, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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