The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in jive different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in jive different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in jive different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
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graph illustrates
people
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spending on
a
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various
of
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services in five nations in
year
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2002. In
genral
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general
,
The
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the
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highest
catgory
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category
spending by people in the
table
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is food, drinks, and
tabacco
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tobacco
,
while
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the least rate is by far leisure and
eduication
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education
. In the beginning, Turkey is not only the top
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country
in the graph in food
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and drinks with 32.14 per cent , but
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is the highest in education with 4.35 per cent.
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, the
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second
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by
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Ireland
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with 28.91% in consumable
item
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items
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such
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as food, drinks, and
tabacco
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tobacco
. It is clear
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, as
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shown in the
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table
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that Italy, which is the
capial
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capital
of fashion, takes the highest spending on clothing and footwear with 9.00 per cent,
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whereas
Sweden is in the lowest part
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the
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with 5.4%.
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, Spain place at the lowest spending
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education and clothing items.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words table with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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