Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Opinions are divided on whether a nation can manage both economic progress and environmental sustainability or whether it is impossible to succeed in these two fields.
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I acknowledge the latter, I still firmly agree with the former
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with proper planning and strategic policies, economic growth and ecological protection can coexist. Those who argue that economic development comes at the cost of increasing pollutant emissions and resource consumption may point to rapid industrialisation and excessive consumption, leading to several environmental issues involving deforestation, water pollution, and gas emissions. They may well argue that many enterprises focus solely on their business and ignore environmental issues.
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is largely because transitioning to environmentally friendly production requires significant time and financial investment. What is more, many authorities prioritise economic progress as it is perceived to be the quickest means of improving living standards, and because of the demand for
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and rapid urbanisation, cutting many trees and tapping natural resources is the most feasible solution.
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,
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phenomenon is only temporary, as living standards improve, citizens become more environmentally conscious and demand stricter regulations, prompting
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to adopt greener policies. In the long run, greater economic advancement enables the nation to invest more in renewable
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and modern recycling systems, which can significantly improve environmental quality.
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, I am still in favour of the ability to succeed in both economic growth and ecological protection, partly because of economic prosperity and partly because of various measures adopted by
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. Regarding the former, wealthier countries possess greater financial capacity and intellectual capital to invest in renewable
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and green infrastructure.
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is largely
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technological advancements, as economic success allows
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and private firms to allocate greater resources to research and development.
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, cleaner production methods and
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-efficient technologies can be created, reducing pollution at its source rather than merely controlling its consequences. In fact, some countries have used these new
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sources to replace traditional sources in some fields. Another reason worth mentioning is that
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can enforce strict regulations,
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as carbon taxes on the public and especially industries, to protect the environment, thereby enhancing sustainable development without degrading the environment. Evidence for
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can be seen in the Philippines, where a “number coding” scheme restricts cars from using certain roads on specific days based on the
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digit of their license plate, reducing car exhaust emissions in order to mitigate environmental pollution and protect their citizens’ health. In conclusion, it is understandable why some states focus solely on economic growth and ignore environmental issues.
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, I would take the view that they can manage both economic success and environmental protection thanks to collective efforts.

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task response
Make your view clear in the final paragraph and keep the main ideas in the body close to the topic.
coherence
Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and link ideas with simple words like 'so', 'but', 'also', and 'therefore'.
grammar
Keep sentences short and avoid long lines. Check grammar and keep one idea per sentence.
lexical
Pick one or two strong examples that match your main points and explain how they show your view.
content
The essay shows two sides and a view at the end.
structure
There is a good flow from one idea to another with linking words.
logic
You show how money can help green tech
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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