You recently bought a second-hand car from a company that sells used cars, but the car developed some problems. You have phoned, left messages and sent emails, but you have not heard anything from the company that sold you the car. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter explain the problems you have had in contacting the company, and explain your dissatisfaction describe the problems with the car tell the manager what you want him to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to inform you that I am facing some issues with the
car
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that I recently bought from your company. Before I explain the problems with the
car
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, I would like to bring to your attention that your customer communication service is not the best. I tried to call your helpline, and sent messages and emails
but
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I have not received any response. So, it makes it very hard to contact your staff. Please ensure better communication with your customers to avoid any inconvenience. That said, I bought a used
car
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from your company
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I am facing problems with the brake system. As per our agreement, new
brakes
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were supposed to be installed.
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, the condition of the
brakes
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is below standard. It is very dangerous for me to drive a
car
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without good
brakes
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.
Therefore
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, I would like to request
you
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that you
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to
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replace the
brakes
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of my
car
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. The replacement should be free of cost because of the warranty for 6 months. Please share your availability with me
and
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I can bring the
car
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to your garage. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Hamza

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task achievement
Try to include more details about the problems you faced with the car, to make it clearer.
coherence
Make sure to connect your ideas smoothly; add some linking words between sentences.
coherence
Check for small grammar mistakes to make the letter look better.
coherence
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which is very good.
task achievement
You have stated your issue clearly, which helps the reader understand your situation.
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