In today's world, music has become an integral part of every society and culture. Some people think it is beneficial for both individual and society; however, some people think that music has a negative influence. Discuss both the viewpoints and state your opinion.

Music

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is

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part of representing every culture and

traditions

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tradition

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. In

modern

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the modern

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world, it has become an influence for people

as

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apply

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,

some

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as some

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believe that it is very helpful for connecting society

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while

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,

others

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while others

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argue that it promotes violence. I will give my opinion as to why

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think

songs

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are creating

bad

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a bad

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image for

community

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the community

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.

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with, some believe

music

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helps to connect people

of

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in

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society with each other. Individuals come together to celebrate

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apply

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special occasions with

singing

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apply

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songs

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.

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, they enjoy the tunes and the lyrics of the

music

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which

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gives them relief from stress and some time off from their workloads.

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, India has many festivals that are celebrated with

music

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. As

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there is

tradition

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a tradition

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that

music

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should be part of every special

occasions

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occasion

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.

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,

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others argue that it grows the influence of violence. Most of the

songs

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in

today

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today's

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society are filmed with guns and drugs. Teenagers are the

one's

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ones

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who get inspired

from

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by

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these singers. As

,

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apply

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they are in

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the devloping

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devloping

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developing

stage. They tend to copy the same things shown in

music

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videos.

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, Australia is one of the countries where it has affected the younger individuals

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, and

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due to

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this

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, their crime rate increased significantly. In conclusion, I think it

is

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has

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putting negative influence

in

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on

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every nation. Governments have to take action to restrain

from

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apply

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this

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devloping

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developing

issues

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issue

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. They should only advertise the

cultural

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culturally

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related

songs

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that are informative and

knowledgable

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knowledgeable

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. It should promote

the

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good image among teenagers.