The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The flow chart illustrates the

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of how

sugar

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is produced from

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cane

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, it's clear that the procedure is linear and the whole

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can be divided into seven main stages,

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from growing

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canes and

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with drying and cooling.

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, the

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cane

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grows

about

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12 to 18 months,

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it's harvested in two ways, including by

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of farmers cutting the canes

by

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a sickle or by

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automatic

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harvester. After that, the pieces of

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canes

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cane

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are crushed by a certain squeezer into juice. The

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cane

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juice is

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purified by a limestone filter and heated in

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evaporator, where part of the water is evaporated

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the juice becomes syrup.

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this

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process

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is completed, the centrifuge separates

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crystals from syrup.

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, the

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crystals are dried and cooled in a bucket

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that's the end of the

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.