The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The flow chart illustrates the manufacturing procedure for producing
sugar
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from
sugar
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cane, including seven distinct stages.
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, there are many steps in both the agricultural and
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industrial parts, and the industrial programs play a significant role in them. 
Initially
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,
sugar
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cane grows in fields for 12 to 18 months. When ready, farmers harvest the mature plants. The harvested cane
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goes to a factory where heavy rollers crush it to extract the
juice
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.
This
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raw
juice
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contains impurities, so it undergoes cleaning. During cleaning, unwanted materials are removed to prepare the
juice
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for the next stage. In the industrial parts, the purified
juice
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enters evaporation chambers where sustained heating reduces water content, concentrating it into viscous syrup.
This
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syrup
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moves to fast-spinning centrifuges where
sugar
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crystals separate from the sticky liquid. Eventually, these wet crystals are dried and cooled until they become the dry, granulated
sugar
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that we use.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, juice with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • manufacturing process
  • cleaning
  • sanitation
  • quality control
  • crushing
  • extracted juice
  • boiling
  • concentrated syrup
  • crystallization
  • sugar crystals
  • separation
  • molasses
  • purity
  • quality
  • food processing
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