The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture flow of sand and water is added, after mixing through a wire cutter or mould.
This
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step involves driving the oven for 24- 48 hrs,
next,
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baking through two kilns at different temperatures, before cooling
chamber
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the chamber
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for 48 – 72 hrs and packing.
Finally
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, blicks are delivered. The chart illustrates information about the steps and equipment involved in the production of bricks for the building industry.
Overall
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, looking at the picture closely, the process has multiple different stages starting from digging the clay and ending with delivering to distributors
to
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in
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the building industry.
Firstly
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, the making of bricks process begins when the digger takes clay.
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, it is placed on a metal grid where it is passed through a roller into smaller pieces. After that, the
blick
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bill
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are
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is
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delivered.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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