The chart below shows the annual rice production in four countries in 2005, 2010, and 2015.

The chart below shows the annual rice production in four countries in 2005, 2010, and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the annual rice production in four countries in 2005, 2010, and 2015.
The data below gives information about the annual
rice
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production
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in four countries [ A, B, C, and D ] for the
years
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2005, 2010, and 2015. The figures are given in
million
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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, countries A and B produced significantly more
rice
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than countries C and D in all
years
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.
To begin
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with, in 2005 the
country
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A produced approximately 45
million
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tonnes
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of
rice
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, which gradually rose to about 50
million
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tonnes
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in 2015. and about the
year
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of 2010, it was lower than
year
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2015. And starting from
country
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B,there were lots of changes in five
years
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,
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In 2005, the
rice
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production
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of a
million
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tonnes
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was the largest disparity, declining by 25 annually. And in 2010, it consisted of the decline in
rice
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production
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. And about the
last
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year
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, 2015,
this
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is
also
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lower than 2010. As for
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C,
production
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rose modestly from about 5
million
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tonnes
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in 2005 to roughly 8
million
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in 2015.
Country
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D showed the lowest annuals among the four stages; the
years
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2005 and 2010 showed that the same disparity persisted into those
years
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. And about the
last
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year
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, 2015, it was equal to 5
million
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tonnes
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of
rice
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rice, production, years, million, tonnes, country, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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