International tourism is harmful for developing countries because it can damage local environment and culture, therefore it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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sector is reflected in the question of whether global

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has encouraged

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local environment and culture in developing countries, or is doing the opposite.

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essay explores why

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worldwide

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can't be embraced without its identified risks to be carefully solved by the local governments. In the emerging nation, tourism is one of the potential to be

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big part in countries' economy. The transactions

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and foreign exchanges invested contribute to monetary and financial growth. Several countries attribute their

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boom be sourced from

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cosmopolitan

tourism, especially those within the oceanic region like

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and Bora Bora.

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ecosystems

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as a mutual

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between the people, the authorities, and

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private enterprises that

are thriving

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from these interactions. Global

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euphoria can

put

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up

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cultural exchanges between territories and kingdoms, fostering a growth of knowledge to be found.

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, several states are relying on the international excursion alone and not diversifying their economic production and activities. In

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the Maldives

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,

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, tourism

is scaled

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to

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60% of the nation's GDP.

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, with the problems of global warming and rising sea

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, the government needs to

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fast in preparing for the economic meltdown. Some governments

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experiencing

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apply

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overtourism regarding the tourists

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over the world, with Bali in Indonesia

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one of them. There is

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shift paradigm of habits that

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happening from

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tourist

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tourists

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coming to Bali, which is observed not only to have some stress-free trips, but

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transforming them into illegal settlers for a long period of time.

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is creating conflicts within local communities. Surge of arrivals from global

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travellers

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cause

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overcrowding, which will undermine the environment and spatial capacity of the area.

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can be alleviated with the government exerting their authority in planning, providing sufficient public and physical infrastructures, ratifying

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culture protection

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, and increasing law enforcement in the border control. In conclusion, international leisures can still be implemented to supply and

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as a component of one state's economic engine, with the strong prerequisites that correct and intervention acumen from the authorities.