The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The charts illustrate the changes in the
ownership
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of electrical appliances (washing
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machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner) and the time spent on
housework
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in households of a certain country from 1920 to 2019.
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, from 1920 to 2019, household
ownership
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of the three appliances rose and some
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100%,
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weekly
housework
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hours dropped sharply, likely
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more appliance use. In terms of appliance
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, all three types experienced a rising trend. In 1920, the rates were relatively low, with the highest being for the washing
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machine at around 40%. By 2019, the
ownership
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of refrigerators and vacuum cleaners approached 100%, and the washing
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machine
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had a high
ownership
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rate. Regarding
housework
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time, it dropped significantly from about 50 hours per week per household in 1920 to approximately 10 hours in 2019.
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the increasing use of electrical appliances may have contributed to the reduction in the time spent on
housework
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over the period.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ownership, housework with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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