The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990,2000 and 2010.

The table compares milk production per year in the Netherlands, Australia , Tanzania and Guatemala in 1990,2000 and 2010.

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,the manufacture of milk in three countries,

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as the Netherlands, Tanzania and Guatemala, experienced a slight increase,

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in Australia

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trend decreased between the twentieth anniversary. The production of cream in the Netherlands started at 11,262,000 litres,after

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figure fell slightly to 11,155,000 litres in 2000, but

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it experienced a gradual increase to 11,466,000

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figure in Australia was at 11,246,000 at the beginning,and declined slowly to 11,105,000 in 2000,after it fell gradually to 9,165,000 gallons in 2010.

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Tanzania, it was at 87.000 in 1990,and rose quickly to 1,42,000 ,later

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production climbed slowly to 1,55,000 pints in 2010.In Guatemala output of buttermilk was at 26,000 litres at the beginning,and increased slightly to 55.000 gallons in 2000 ,

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in 2010

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trend ended at 84.000 pints.

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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990,2000 and 2010.

discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools.Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

You left a jacket behind at a restaurant you went to recently. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter 1) Describe the jacket 2) explain when you visited the restaurant and where you were sitting 3) Say what you want the manager to do.