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The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the popularity of a university library and its amenities among
students
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.
Overall
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, it can be easily perceived that
students
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 were more satisfied with
library’s
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the library’s
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 current opening
hours
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 than
the
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with the
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 support they offered. Beginning with Part-Time
students
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,
although
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 they were interested
about
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in
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 the library’s current opening
hours
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, they did not seem to be happy about the IT guidance they
gave
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received
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as
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, as
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 45% of them voted for being not happy at all about IT. The number of neutral part-time
students
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 for the two categories
were
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was
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 quite similar
as
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, as
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 it was 35% and 27% for the two categories, IT support and opening
hours
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, respectively.
Conversely
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, regarding
full time
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full-time
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students
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, a totally different trend was observed. The percentage of people who voted
being
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as being
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 quite happy was exactly the same
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, with
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with
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at
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 32%.
However
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, the share of people who were completely satisfied with opening
hours
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 was 12% than that in the other group.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • university library
  • full-time students
  • part-time students
  • opinions
  • services
  • satisfaction
  • comparison
  • satisfaction levels
  • different library services
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