The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

The process above shows the ways to make compost for the garden from reusing organic

waste

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Overall

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this

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process of cycling

waste

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to make garden

fertilizer

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fertiliser

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has all five steps with three

mains

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stages.

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, we need to prepare a big plastic bottle with a volume of 2 cubic metres and ensure that all the holes on the bottle can facilitate air circulation. After that,

waste

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is taken into the container and divided into three layers . The first layer is food

which

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spoils 15 centimetres high, the middle layer is grass and has the same height as the food, and

for

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apply

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the

last

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one is newspaper. After adding the

waste

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into the bottle,

then

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the nitrogen and hot water

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are

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poured on

the

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apply

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top of the

waste

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at the same time

and

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which

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helps

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with them

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them

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their

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decomposition. Sealing the container and the heat will build up inside

due to

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microbial activity.

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, we need to wait for 6 months, so that the compost is ready to use for the garden.

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The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this be solved?

It is difficult for many people to create a balance between their professional and their personal life. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.