The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

The process above shows the ways to make compost for the garden from reusing organic

waste

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this

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process of cycling

waste

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to make garden

fertilizer

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fertiliser

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has all five steps with three

mains

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main

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stages.

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, we need to prepare a big plastic bottle with a volume of 2 cubic metres and ensure that all the holes on the bottle can facilitate air circulation. After that,

waste

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is taken into the container and divided into three layers . The first layer is food

which

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, which

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spoils 15 centimetres high, the middle layer is grass and has the same height as the food, and

for

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apply

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the

last

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one is newspaper. After adding the

waste

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into the bottle,

then

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the nitrogen and hot water

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are

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poured on

the

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apply

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top of the

waste

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at the same time

and

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which

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helps

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with them

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them

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their

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decomposition. Sealing the container and the heat will build up inside

due to

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microbial activity.

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, we need to wait for 6 months, so that the compost is ready to use for the garden.

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