The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
flow-chart
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indicates how ethanol fuel
are
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is
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processed from
corn
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.
Overall
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, there are nine stages to
this
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process, beginning with
assemble
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assembling
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corn
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and ending in
transportation
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the transportation
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system.
Firstly
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,
corn
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are
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is
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collected and stored.
Then
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, it is milled
and
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water will be added to
mill
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the mill
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corn
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. Afterwards, it will be cooked
4
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hours. Next stage, it is fermenting time for 48 hours. After fermentation, the
seprating
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separating
process will
seprate
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separate
liquid and solid
by- products
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. In the
pourifing
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purifying
stage, the pure ethanol will collect.
Moreover
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, it is ready for
storing
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. In
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the finall
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finall
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final
stage, ethanol will
send
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be sent
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for
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to
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the transporting
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transporting
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transportation
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system.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words corn with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethanol
  • corn
  • harvesting
  • milling
  • cooking
  • fermentation
  • distillation
  • dehydration
  • enzymes
  • fermentable sugars
  • concentration
  • anhydrous ethanol
  • fuel
  • processed
  • mixture
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • high temperatures
  • surface area
  • separation
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