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The table and chart below gives information on the police budget for 20017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. the table shows where the money came fromand the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and chart below gives information on the police budget for 20017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. the table shows where the money came fromand the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the source of income for the police budget , and the pie charts demonstrate the allocation of funds to different aspects during 2017 and 2018 in an area of Britain.
Overall
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, it is evident that a higher amount of revenue was received from the National Government
and
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 a major proportion of
money
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 was distributed to staff as salaries in both years. In 2017, the total monetary value of the police budget was 304
million
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pounds
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 , which increased to 318.6
million
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pounds
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 in 2018.
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, in the initial year, the contribution of the National Government to the budget was 175.5
million
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pounds
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 , and the revenue generated by local taxes was 91.2
million
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pounds
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. In the next year, these figures rose to 177.8
million
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 and 102.3
million
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pounds
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, respectively.
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, funds gathered from other sources ,
such
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 as grants, were 38
million
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 in 2017 and 38.5
million
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pounds
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 in 2018.
On the other hand
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, a significant fraction of the income was utilised to pay wages and salaries to employees in both years , accounting for 75 per cent in 2017 and 69 per cent in 2018. Meanwhile, the proportion of money invested in the development of infrastructure was similar in the two years.
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, there was a slight difference of 6 per cent in the proportion of expenditure on technology in 2017 and 2018.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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