It is believed that driving under the influence of drugs should lead to a total ban from driving regardless been involved in an accident or not.
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essay disagrees with the Linking Words
satement
as strict penalties can be enforced and punishment.
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statement
Drivers
caught under the influence of alcohol should be charged for disobeying the Use synonyms
laws
. Fix the agreement mistake
law
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is to say that, if one is found drunk must Linking Words
be charged
a lot of money as Verb problem
pay
penalty
fee. Correct article usage
a penalty
Therefore
, Linking Words
drivers
will reduce the amount of alcohol intake when driving as they will be afraid to be caught, and some cannot afford to pay the charges Use synonyms
and
leads to unnecessary expenses. Correct word choice
which
As a
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result
it reduces speed on the road and accidents as well. Add a comma
result,
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government
of Zimbabwe increased Correct article usage
the government
penalty
fee to all Correct article usage
the penalty
drivers
who drink Use synonyms
when
driving, Correct word choice
while
by enforcing
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and as
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this
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a
law
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result
the
cases have dropped to 20% from 75%. Punctuation problem
, the
Thus
, the essay believes that it is best to apply strict rules on roads Linking Words
than
banning Rephrase
rather than
drivers
for life.
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Moreover
, punishing those who go against the rules and regulations when it comes to driving is the best solution. Linking Words
In other words
, many individuals Linking Words
makes
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make
mistake
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harsh
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harshly
on
them does not solve anything. Police should punish them by letting them spend the night behind Change preposition
with
the
bars without Correct article usage
apply
any
blanket, so that they learn from their mistake. Correct determiner usage
a
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, Linking Words
the
many residents in Bulawayo are scared of taking drugs if they know that they will be driving because of the bad experience they had after Correct article usage
apply
been
caught by Wrong verb form
being
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the policy
policy
. Use the right word
police
This
essay argues thatLinking Words
,
applying these sorts of rules has Punctuation problem
apply
charged
how people behave when driving.
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changed
although
it is believed that a total ban is the best way to deal with these cases, Linking Words
l
think that penalties and punishment are the best.Correct pronoun usage
I