Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include Where you live The problem What he should do

Dear Chatura, My name is Gihan Edirisinghe Kodikara
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I am your tenant at 35 Chantilly Street, Sunrise Apartment Complex. I am writing to complain about the noise at your apartment complex, especially at night. There is ongoing maintenance happening these days in the condo complex. The maintenance company are continuing these construction works until midnight.
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, some construction workers use our passage (Passage B) for bending the cables and fixing them to the light boards, which generates huge noise and causes security problems.
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, we were unable to get a good sleep
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noise. We are requesting you to inform the condo management company about
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matter and stop any kind of work after 5:00pm.
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, can you inform them not to allow construction workers to pass through our passage for any reason? Thank you for considering my request , and I am happy to provide any information you need. Yours secretly, Gihan Edirisinghe

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Try to organize your paragraphs better. Each idea should be clear in its own paragraph.
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Make sure to begin and end your letter more formally. Instead of 'Yours secretly', you might use 'Yours sincerely'.
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You addressed the problem well but try to express your feelings about the noise more strongly to show your need for action.
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You clearly stated the issue with the noise, which is important for your landlord to understand.
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Your letter has a polite tone, which is good when making a complaint.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • complaint
  • tenant
  • landlord
  • block of flats
  • disturbance
  • noise pollution
  • soundproofing
  • regulations
  • inconvenience
  • reside
  • address
  • issue
  • resolve
  • assurance
  • promptly
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