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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their ann income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information oy selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their ann income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information oy selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the total
number
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 of US
households
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according to
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 their yearly
income
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 in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, the
number
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 of families with an annual
income
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 of $100,000 was the highest,
while
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 the
number
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 of families with a yearly
income
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 between $75,000 and $99,999 was the lowest throughout the entire period. In 2007, the
number
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 of
households
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 with less than 25,000
dollars
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 and between 25,000 and 49,999
dollars
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 annual
income
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 was around 25
million
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. Just over 20
million
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households
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 with a yearly
income
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 between 50,00 and 74,999
dollars
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 , and just under 15
million
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households
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 with an annual
income
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 from 75,000 to 99,999
dollars
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 , and around 30
million
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 families with 100,000
dollars
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 or
highest
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higher
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. In 2011 and 2015, the numbers didn't change significantly and stayed at the level of 2007.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, households, income, dollars, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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