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The bar chart shows the percentage of government spending on road and transport (1990 - 2005). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of government spending on road and transport (1990 - 2005). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares the proportion of government spending on roads and transport in four different countries and various years.
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,
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 Portugal and Italy showed the highest percentages of spending on the development of transport systems, the UK and the USA showed the lowest
percentage
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 over the given period. As the bar chart shows, 25% of government funding was spent on
infrastructure
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 in Portugal in 1990.
Then
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, it experienced a consistent decline to around 24% in 1995 and 23% in 2000,
then
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 20% in 2005.As for Italy, in 1995 and 2000, spending on transportation and the road network was at its highest percentages
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 23% and 24% respectively.
In contrast
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, in 1995 and 2000,
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 UK displayed a much lower
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, with 20% and 18% respectively. In all four years, in the UK, spending on
infrastructure
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 was the same
percentage
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 , with approximately 8% to 10%.As for the USA, in the first two years, spending on
infrastructure
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 was 12% and 10%.
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, the
percentage
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 of spending on
infrastructure
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 rose to 13% in 2000 and 15% in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, infrastructure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 6 times.
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