The line graphs illustrate changes in ownership of the washing machine, refrigerator,
vacuum
cleaner in percentages and time spent in number of hours for housework per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Correct word choice
and vacuum
Overall
, the upward trend has been observed over the years for buying electronic appliances at Linking Words
home
as it makes tasks easier for people. Punctuation problem
home,
Firstly
, Linking Words
refrigerator
and vacuum cleaners are in every house from 2000 to 2019 as they are basic and mandatory tools.
Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
Secondly
, for the washing Linking Words
machine
there were some fluctuations observed as ownership increased until 1960 and Add a comma
machine,
then
decreased slightly in 1080. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
Refrigerator
Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
was
not in use by citizens before 1920 and steadily climbed over Correct subject-verb agreement
were
the
time; Correct article usage
apply
reached
Correct pronoun usage
they reached
it
Correct pronoun usage
their
peaked
Replace the word
peak
about
100 Change preposition
of about
percent
in 1980 and remained stable. Use the right word
per cent
Furthermore
, Linking Words
ownerships
Fix the agreement mistake
ownership
for
vacuum cleaners climbed considerably Change preposition
of
like
refrigerators. Punctuation problem
, like
Additionally
, as Linking Words
number
of gadgets Correct article usage
the number
rose
the number of hours per week Punctuation problem
rose,
spending
on work dropped; from just over 45 in 1920 to less than 20 in 2019.Replace the word
spent