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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010

The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010
The bar chart compares the estimated
oil
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production
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 levels in six countries—
Saudi
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Arabia
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,
Iran
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,
Iraq
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, Kuwait, the UAE, and
Qatar
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—across three years: 1990, 2000, and 2010.
Oil
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production
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 is measured in millions of
barrels
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 per
day
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.
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, all countries experienced a general upward trend in
oil
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production
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 over the two decades.
Saudi
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Arabia
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 remained by far the largest producer throughout the period,
while
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Qatar
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 consistently produced the least
oil
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. In 1990,
Saudi
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Arabia
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 led with just over 8
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, far surpassing the other nations.
Iran
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 produced around 3
million
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barrels
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,
while
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Iraq
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, Kuwait, and the UAE each produced slightly under that figure.
Qatar
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,
by contrast
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, had the smallest output at under 1
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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. By 2000,
oil
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production
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 in most countries had increased slightly. The UAE’s
production
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 remained stable,
while
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 modest growth was seen in
Iran
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,
Iraq
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, and Kuwait.
Saudi
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Arabia
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 saw a more noticeable rise to about 10
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, reinforcing its leading position.
Qatar
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's figures remained roughly unchanged. By 2010,
oil
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 output had grown
further
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 in nearly all countries. Notably,
Saudi
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Arabia
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 experienced a dramatic surge, producing over 14
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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, nearly doubling its 1990 figure.
Iran
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,
Iraq
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, and the UAE each rose to over 3
million
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barrels
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,
while
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 Kuwait’s output
also
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 increased
but
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, but
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 to a lesser extent.
Qatar
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 remained the smallest contributor, maintaining a level just below 1
million
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barrels
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 per
day
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production, arabia, iran, iraq, barrels, day, saudi, qatar, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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