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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make icomparison where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make icomparison where relevant.
The maps illustrate changes which have been made for visitors on the island.
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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a transformation from a basic island to a more developed and with some entertainment places. In the northeast, it has major updates, like a diving school, a surf beach and a boardwalk footpath.
Furthermore
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, the restaurant had some adjustments, now near the food place, it
also
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 has shops. The most noticeable change is that the accommodations were replaced by a pool.
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, the green area has become much better with a large number of trees,
then
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 it was in 1980 .
In contrast
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, the northwestern region remained the same , and all modifications were on the other side of
this
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 territory.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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