The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens’ health rather than on protecting the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that the government ought to

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apply

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share money to research into medicine to ensure people's health rather than

provide

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providing

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to protect the

surroundings

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environment

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While

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some people oppose

this

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notion,

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strongly argue in

favor

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favour

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, as the discoveries in medicine

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are

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importent

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important

for

human

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humans

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. Nowadays, the technologies are improving quickly that are

crusial

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crucial

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task achievement

Make sure to clearly express your main ideas and support them with examples.

coherence and cohesion

Try to connect your sentences and paragraphs better for smoother reading.

language use

Pay attention to spelling and grammar to make your points clearer.

strength

You have a clear opinion about the topic.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

57 words

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moral obligation
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economic benefits
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Include an introduction and conclusion

Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

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Some people think that schools should prioritize teaching students’ practical skills for the workplace, while others believe that schools should focus on academic subjects such as science and math. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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