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Some people say that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task. What are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What is the best way to overcome them? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people think that the most complicated thing is learning a foreign
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 is its
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also will
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 show that it is easier to learn through games, films or
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 rather than working hard. During learning a foreign
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, the most overwhelming part can be
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grammar
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 and
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 and correct sentence.
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take
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 a long time to learn because there can be a million
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 and your brain should memorise all of them. Most people have a bad memory, which
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 they give it up.
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, there are a thousand
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 and in the right place. There are two main ways to overcome these difficulties. The first solution is learning through games or films.
This
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 can make the process funnier and easier than learning by hard
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 When humans do not feel
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pressure and learn
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 a good mood, there is a high chance that they can
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 more words. The reason is that the human brain loves entertaining activities, and it improves neuron
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, which leads to productivity. Another way is studying through
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. In modern life, there are many types of
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 that can find an individual approach for each person, making the learning quicker. In conclusion,
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 is difficult, especially
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 and
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 ones, there are many ways to overcome it.
Courses
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, games or even films can contribute to learning faster and better.

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Make sure to include specific examples or experiences to support your points more clearly.
coherence and cohesion
Use clearer connections between your ideas to help the reader follow your argument.
coherence and cohesion
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to avoid confusion in your writing.
task achievement
You have identified the two main challenges of learning a foreign language clearly.
coherence and cohesion
Your conclusion nicely summarizes your main points and suggests solutions.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Phonetics
  • Syntax
  • Conjugation
  • Idiomatic expressions
  • Cognates
  • Immersion
  • Fluency
  • Pedagogy
  • Linguistic competence
  • Mnemonics
  • Language acquisition
  • Pronunciation drills
  • Conversation partners
  • Language barrier
  • Bilingualism
  • Multilingualism
  • Accent reduction
  • Comprehension
  • Language proficiency
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