The maps below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009.

The floor plans illustrate the comparison of the ground floor library in 2001 and its redecoration in 2009.

Overall

Linking Words

although

Linking Words

the digital facilities and librarian's desk remained unchanged, the library underwent significant changes by 2009, particularly in the addition of new

book

Use synonyms

genres and facilities. In 2001, the librarian's desk was situated directly opposite the entrance. There were only three

book

Use synonyms

genres available, with self-help and history located next to each other in the western part of the room,

whereas

Linking Words

fiction occupied the northernmost area. Meanwhile, the films and DVDs

section

Use synonyms

stood opposite

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the history

section

Use synonyms

, separated by a group of tables in the centre. The computers were placed near the

films

Fix the agreement mistake

film

show examples

and

DVDs

Fix the agreement mistake

DVD

show examples

section

Use synonyms

. By 2009, major transformations had

occured

Correct your spelling

occurred

. All

book

Use synonyms

stacks were reorganised along the western side, including additional

book

Use synonyms

genres (kitchen, economics, and law), bringing the total to six sections. The former fiction

section

Use synonyms

was replaced with additional table areas,

while

Linking Words

the original eight small tables had been replaced by four longer ones. A children's area was

also

Linking Words

created between the new and existing tables, providing a dedicated space for young readers.

nineband9s

Jul 31, 2025

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.

▼

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

▼

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words book, section with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

187 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter - introduce yourself - ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes - explain why you need to break the contract.
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to sincerely apologize for breaking the contract in which I rented a flat from your agency. It was 10 months ago, and our arrangement was for one year but I need to leave the flat two months early. I recognize that my actions may have caused inconvenience and I am truly sorry for any negative impact it may have had on you. I take full responsibility for my actions, and I want to assure you that this behaviour is not a reflection of my character. I understand the importance of the commitment, and I regret my lapse in judgment.
7.5
band
Som e people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think that it’s a waste of time.Discuss both sides of question!
Whether children should learn art in school or not is a topic that is often debated. From the writer's perspective, it is beneficial for students to study art as it improves creativity as well as patience, despite those who think that it takes away valuable time.
8
band
Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?
Learners are becoming ever more dependent on technology, such as the Internet and mobile devices. This essay will discuss one of the main problems associated with dependence on computers and suggest a viable solution.
6
band
Full-time students should spend a lot of time on studies but they should be involved in other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Time spent by students will have an impact on their needs in the future. In fact, I agree that students should spend their time on other activities besides their studies.
6
band
Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In my opinion, competition at work, at school, and in daily life can both be a good thing and a bad thing. Why? Because I think too much of anything can be destructive. Yes, it’s a very good thing to be competitive, but don’t overdo it! Having no competition in your life at all can be very depressing because you have no motivation, no goals you want to achieve, every time you wake up in the morning. I don’t believe that there is such a thing as “co-operating” too much. When you work with someone, you should work together as a team and co-operate, but also do things for yourself, like something career-wise. You should think of your future in your work. That goes the same if you are still in school. Take my school life for example: If I am very good at one subject in particular, lots of other students may come up to me and ask for pointers. I would be very glad to help them. If there is any homework, schoolmates may come over to do it together. This is also fine and very good for buil...

The maps below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter - introduce yourself - ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes - explain why you need to break the contract.

Som e people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think that it’s a waste of time.Discuss both sides of question!

Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

Full-time students should spend a lot of time on studies but they should be involved in other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.