The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates how biofuel called
ethanol
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is produced.
Overall
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,
this
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diagram
has
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is
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divided into 3 steps. In
step
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1, initial growth and harvesting
pre-processing
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, pre-processing
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and processing in the lab to create
ethanol
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.
Ethanol
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utilization
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utilisation
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.
This
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is a
closed loop
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system. In the first
step
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, plants and trees
growth
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grow
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by the energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide. After
,
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apply
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the wood is harvested for pre-processing.
Next,
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the product is cellulose
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, which
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is
then
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put into the lab for processing. In the second
step
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, plants and trees become sugars
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after processing. Sugar is formulated to become microbes
added
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apply
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. The excess is turned into
ethanol
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,
change
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from solid to gas. In the third
step
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,
ethanol
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comes
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is converted
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to carbon dioxide and
begin
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begins
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new
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a new
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period.
Ethanol
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change
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changes
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to carbon dioxide,
discharge
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discharged
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into the environment by transport
station
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stations
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like
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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, cars or trucks. When exhaust vehicle
emission
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emissions
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released
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are released
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into the environment, the cycle
begin
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begins
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again.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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