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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the languages with
largest
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the largest
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speakers
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. The graph displays six different languages, Hindi, Mandarin Chinese , Spanish ,
English
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 , Arabic ,
Portuguse
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Portuguese
.
Overall
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,
Mandrain
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Mandarin
 Chinese shows the
bigger
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number
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 of native
speakers
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 amount six countries
as well as
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 in
total
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the total
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number
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 of
speakers
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,
whearse
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whereas
 the largest
number
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 of
speakers
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 as an additional
language
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 goes for
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English
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the English
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language
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.
On the other hand
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, Portuguese are the lowest in
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 of native
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,
number
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speakers
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 as an additional
language
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 and in total
number
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 of
speakers
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.
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English
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The English
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language
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 is the most
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language
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spoken language
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 that have
number
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 of
speakers
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 as an extra
language
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which
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, which
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 is 603
million
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, so it
make
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makes
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language
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apply
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the second
language
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 in total
number
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 of
speakers
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.
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Number
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The number
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 of
Mondrian
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Mandarin
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 Chinese
is
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speakers is
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highest
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the highest
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 at 900
million
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and
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, and
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 in
proportional
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a proportional
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 relationship between it and
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number
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the number
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 of total
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speakers
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speakers,
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 as the biggest
number
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 is 1,090
million
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.
In contrast
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 with the Arabic
language
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 is 24
million
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in
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apply
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people take it as
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a secondry
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secondry
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secondary
language
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and
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, and
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 with 230
million
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in
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apply
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total
speakers
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words speakers, english, number, language, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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