There is a bit of controversy when it comes to sense of belonging, as there is a common belief that those
have
been educated as doctors and engineersCorrect pronoun usage
who have
,
should stay in Punctuation problem
apply
country
Correct article usage
the country
they
studied, Rephrase
where they
while
others, myself included, do not Linking Words
favor
Use the right word
favour
this
, as I believe everyone Linking Words
have
the right to choose their Correct subject-verb agreement
has
favorite
working environment. Both views have their own reasons Use the right word
favourite
which
will be discussed in Punctuation problem
, which
this
essay.
Linking Words
To begin
with, there are numerous reasons behind Linking Words
this
idea that well-trained individuals should stay and work for the place, they Linking Words
have been
graduated. To elaborate, Verb problem
apply
although
in most Linking Words
of
state universities, Change preposition
apply
government
provide Correct article usage
the government
stduents
with a great scholarship during their academic period, Correct your spelling
students
instead
, scholars are accountable for Linking Words
give
services Verb problem
providing
as well as
Linking Words
they studied
for free. Wrong verb form
studying
For instance
, when a learner Linking Words
awards
a fully-funded position at their targeted university, like USA universities, they should represent their Verb problem
earns
knowledges
mutually over time, thereby Fix the agreement mistake
knowledge
being
Verb problem
demonstrating
the
commitment Correct article usage
apply
seems
essential after finishing tertiary education.
Verb problem
is
However
, Linking Words
aforementioned
reasons sound acceptableCorrect article usage
the aforementioned
,
liberty can play a pivotal role in many aspects, Punctuation problem
;
such
as the right Linking Words
of choosing
working Change preposition
to choose
place
. In essence, most of Use the right word
workplace
Correct article usage
the elits
elits
, Correct your spelling
elites
such
as doctors and Linking Words
engineers
are privileged to have a higher standard of living and a decent salary. One instance to exemplify Punctuation problem
engineers,
this
is those studying in top universities, Linking Words
such
as top talented pupils Linking Words
whom
Correct pronoun usage
who
finished
their education period, should be given the chance to select their Verb problem
have finished
desirable
place to live and work, Replace the word
desired
thus
leading to Linking Words
enjoy
a lucrative job Wrong verb form
enjoying
with being worried
about money.
Wrong verb form
without worrying
To conclude
, Linking Words
although
both Linking Words
view points
have their reasonable concepts, I believe that if professionals had the opportunity to Use the right word
viewpoints
flourish
their skills in their interesting working Verb problem
develop
ambience
, it would be useful for Check wording
environment
their both
own country and where they have trained.Correct word order
both their