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Band 4.5

Task: 1 You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. write a letter to your reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter explain what /who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you. what your expectation are from this work. How/ what your manage can do to help you with these problems

Dear
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, I am
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this
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 letter to inform you about workplace issues that I have been struggling
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few
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a few
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 weeks. Earlier, everything was going with
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 and nice until
Richa
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 became the supervisor. Let me explain it
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 detail, I have been noticing a few things about
workplace
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the workplace
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 because
Richa
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 is trying
ro
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to
 change the assigned roles that people used to have
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 is good
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 me. But there should be a proper
procedue
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procedure
 for
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along with
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 training for other
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.
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 all
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choas
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chaos
, everything looked
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up
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and our clients are complaining. In response,
Richa
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 is blaming the team for all
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inconvience
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inconvenience
. There must be a proper procedure followed if
Richa
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 wants a change
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, and
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 I just want you
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 after
Richa
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 and come up with a solution to
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 problem where our company will get a productive change. I am looking forward
for
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 your actions. Your sincerely, Husan

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to check spelling and grammar before submitting your letter.
coherence and cohesion
Try to structure your letter in clear paragraphs with one main idea each.
task achievement
Be more specific about what kind of help you expect from your manager.
task achievement
You clearly outlined the problem with the supervisor.
coherence and cohesion
Your closing statement expressed hope for action.
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