The table below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000.

The table below shows the information about Health services in three European countries between 1980 and 2000.

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, life expectancy increased in all three countries,

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hospital beds per capita declined.

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, the number of doctors per 1,000

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rose, reflecting improved healthcare access. The physicians, starting from Australia in 1980, were 0.8 per 1000

people

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, and in 1990 it became 1990, at the

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period of the year it became 1.0 per 2000people.

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, beginning from France, there were 2.4 per 1000

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, and by the following year it started to decline to 2.2 , and in the

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year it became 1.3. In the

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country in Sweden, almost everything was at its highest proportion. In 1980, it was 3.6 per 1000 individuals, and in 1980 it declined to an unknown extent to 3.0 , and in 2000 it increased to 3.8 per 1000 individuals. In the Hospitals, there were low numbers of beds , and in Australia It was 1.4 around 3.7, and in the second country there everything was low and in Sweden, there were the highest numbers in beds. Coming to a stage , staying in the hospital,

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in France had the shortest average stay,

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Australia and Sweden had the longest average stay in the hospital.

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Healthcare expenditure
Life expectancy
Medical technology
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Access to medical care
Healthcare policies
Economic climate
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