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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts the forested land in millions of
hectares
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 in various portions of the world , like Africa,
Asia
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,
Europe
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, North
America
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, Oceania and South
America
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 Africa and South
America
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 have fallen
throughout
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over
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 the
decade
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past decade
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 and a half.
Thus
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,
Europe
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 and
Asia
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 are the only countries seen with a steady climb.
To begin
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 with, from 1990 to 2000, Africa and South
America
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 had
declined
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lost
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 roughly
around
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apply
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40
million
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hectares
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 of
forest
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 area. By 2005, they stood at 691 and 882 with a
further
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 drop of approximately 20
million
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of
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hectares of
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hectares
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forest
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 area.
Additionally
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, Oceania and North
America
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 had a slight sink in
hectares
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 of nearly 2.5
million
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 of
forest
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 land by 2005 and covering 197 and 705 of land.
In addition
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,
Europe
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 and
Asia
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 had a climb in
hectares
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 among four other 4 countries.
Asia
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 and
Europe
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 had a surge of
a
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apply
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close
of
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to
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 10
million
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hectares
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ofhectares
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of
forest
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 area within a decade and a half of the time. In 2000,
Asia
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 and
Europe
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 had a rise of 6 and 9 , but by 2005 it surged
more
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by more
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 increment of 14, and
therefore
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, stood at 584 and 1001.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hectares, asia, europe, america, million, forest with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surge" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hectares
  • Forested land
  • Regions
  • Distribution
  • Trends
  • Historical data
  • Deforestation
  • Urbanization
  • Outliers
  • Proportionately
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