The exploration and development of safe alternatives of fossil fuels should be the most important global priority. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answers

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that it is crucial to find
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another energy source
for replacing
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to replace
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petrol, and
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should be the
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priority of the world. I strongly agree with
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perspective for the following reasons.
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, fossil
fuels
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such
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as gasoline pollute our environment, and the pollution exists not only during their procedure to use, but
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present on their process to produce. It could damage the whole ecosystem of air, water and the earth as well.
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, the risk of leakage could let the oil pollute the earth or the sea where it is produced. And the energy generation, the main purpose of producing these
fuels
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, causes air pollution by burning.
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, it is necessary to replace these classic
fuels
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with new sources for environmental concerns.
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, those
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are non-sustainable products because the total amount is limited, even including the undiscovered volumes. Some of them are difficult to get because of the digging technology.
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, it is known that there is a large amount of gasoline under the Pacific Ocean, but some of them are impossible to get because of the depth under the sea.
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, the alternative products would be
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to introduce into people's daily
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as quickly as possible.
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but not
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least, replacing fossil fuel could lead to a great change
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global
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economy
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system.
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could
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bring some opportunities to solve regional conflicts or even end a war because of
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crisis. In conclusion, it is better to totally remove fossil
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as soon as possible by a new energy source which is clean, sustainable and environmentally friendly.

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