The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs give us information about how the town of Langley looked in 1910 and in 1950.
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, there were a lot of changes in the city over 40 years, with changes in residences, green spaces and in the railway lines. The main
street
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is Sherman
Street
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. In 1910, to the north of
this
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street
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, there was a factory, wasteland and
houses
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. In 1950, the factory and the
houses
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were demolished and made into mansions. To the south of Sherman
Street
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, in 1910, there were
houses
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, wasteland, and the railway lines. In 1950, all the
houses
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and the railway line were pulled down
and
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the Westland was converted into a park with a children’s play area. In 1910, to the west, we found Jordan
Street
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, an area with townhouses. In 1950, the
houses
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were converted
in
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flats. To the east, in 1910, there were a laundry, a store and a café. In 1950, we had the same laundry and café , but
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the store was demolished, and there are three new stores
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to the east of the park.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words street, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban transformation
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure development
  • commercial activities
  • industrial zones
  • economic growth
  • urban expansion
  • public facilities
  • population growth
  • structured street layouts
  • central market area
  • parkland or green space
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