The maps show two different underground tunnel systems for cars in two Australian cities

The maps show two different underground tunnel systems for cars in two Australian cities
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The maps compare two different underpass systems for cars in Australia in two different cities.
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, there are a number of differences between the two
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systems
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in terms of cost, size, length, time of reconstruction, and the surrounding environment. The
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tunnel
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was significantly smaller by size than the second
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. The
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tunnel
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, which took twelve years from 1986 to 1998, cost $555 million
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and was built underneath a body of water and sand. Meanwhile, the second
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only took 4 years from 2002 with the cheapest cost at only $1,1 million, and was constructed beneath a layer of stone and clay.
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, there are substantial differences by size, with the
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tunnel
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being 1.5 meters high and 2.2km long and the underpass being 2.5, high and 3.6 km long.
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, the
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runner system is four lanes wide,
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the underpass system is six lanes wide

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tunnel, first with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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