There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: ointroduce yourself odescribe the importance of the park osay what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope my letter finds you well. My name is Kajalpreet and I am

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resident of Rose society, living there

since

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last

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20 years. I always enjoyed staying in my locality, because of

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peacful

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peaceful

and natural surroundings

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where our community park plays a vital role. I felt distressed

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when I read about the Municipality's decision

of selling

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to sell

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public garden. It is an exercise ground

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many old populations,

gathering

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area for

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mini parties and

playground

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a playground

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children. I have

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that all the people in our area try their best to keep

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place neat and clean. I would like to request you from the core of my heart

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not to sell our social playground. I would really appreciate it

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if you

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consider my appeal.

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, if you still

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to stick with your decision, unfortunately, I have to approach higher authorities for

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help because your decision is completely unjustified.

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, I will gather all the prestige members of our society to take

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steps to stop

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action. I am looking forward to your positive response

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Yours

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, Kajalpreet

Nijjark131

Aug 6, 2025

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Include a more formal closing statement.

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Express your feelings with clear and strong words.

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You have a clear introduction.

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You used a polite and kind tone throughout the letter.

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Your letter shows your concern for the community.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

189 words

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