The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the
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rates in
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and
Sweden
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from 2011 to 2015.
To begin
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with,
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had a consistently higher
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rate
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than
Finland
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in the earlier years. In 2011, the figure for
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stood at approximately 45%,
whereas
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Finland
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recorded a slightly lower
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of around 38%.
In contrast
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, the following year saw a divergence, as
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’s
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rose sharply to just under 50%,
while
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Finland
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’s dropped to about 33%.
However
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,
this
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trend started to shift from 2013 onwards.
Although
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Sweden
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maintained a higher
rate
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that year, it experienced a slight decline to 47%,
whereas
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Finland
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’s
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climbed to roughly 39%. By 2014, the gap between the two countries had narrowed even
further
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, with
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at around 41% and
Sweden
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at 44%. Interestingly, in 2015,
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’s
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rate
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surpassed that of
Sweden
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for the first time.
Finland
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reached approximately 43%,
while
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Sweden
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’s
rate
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dropped to about 38%.
As a result
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,
Finland
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became the country with the
higher
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highest
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divorce
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rate
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at the end
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of the period. In summary,
while
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Sweden
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had higher
divorce
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rates in the early years,
Finland
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showed a steady increase over time and eventually overtook
Sweden
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by 2015.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words divorce, finland, sweden, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • divorce
  • rate
  • country
  • year
  • show
  • change
  • increase
  • decrease
  • higher
  • lower
  • trend
  • comparison
  • data
  • overall
  • feature
  • attitude
  • peaks
  • fluctuation
  • years
  • society
  • European
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