Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others argue that circumstances and motivation of each crime should always be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is commonly argued that each type of
crime
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should be punished with strict measures,
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others opine that when
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crime
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a crime
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is committed, people should keep in mind and consider what causes individuals to violate the law. In my opinion, all illegal actions can be fixed with punishments;
however
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,
circumstances
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the circumstances
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that
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and
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reasons
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for
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the
crime
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should not be neglected.
This
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essay will explore both perspectives and give a personal point of view.
It is clear that
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the number of perpetration of
offenses
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offences
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has been increasing since
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last
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the last
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century. In many countries,
for example
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, various unlawful acts can be seen,
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as intentional homicide and theft, and these crimes cannot be justified
with
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for
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any
reasons
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reason
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.
Additionally
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, many believe that major
offenses
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offences
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are attributed to minor misdeeds; namely, the more culprits commit
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minor
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illegal actions like stealing small things, the more
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may become large.
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, some individuals advocate that human beings who infringe on the law must be condemned to life imprisonment, and they
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think that
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punishment is the
solely
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way to get rid of the
crime
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.
Moreover
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, if the government introduces repression as a prison sentence, people will try to avoid
carrying out
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committing
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a
crime
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,
while
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a
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the
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country will be free from criminals.
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, society
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this
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statement
because of
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for
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these reasons.
On the other hand
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, there is no doubt
committing
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that committing
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the
offense
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offence
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has not always been deliberate. As an illustration, in some cases of collision, a driver who
hit
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the pedestrian does not do
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misfortune intentionally.
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may be caused by indifference.
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why justices have to consider
causes
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the causes
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of criminal acts when they are judging.
Finally
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,
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such
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in such
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cases, if people break the rules, the punishment should not be
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as strict
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compared to
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a fixed
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judgment. In conclusion, despite the advantages of
fixed
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a fixed
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penalty, from my
perspective
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perspective,
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it should be punished taking both circumstances and motivation into account.

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Task Response
Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction and conclusion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use linking words to connect ideas better, such as "for example" or "moreover" to improve flow.
Task Response
Provide more specific examples to support your arguments.
Coherence and Cohesion
You presented both sides of the argument, which is a good approach for this type of question.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion is clear and organized.
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