Artificial intelligence will create more jobs than it eliminates in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rapid advancement of artificial intelligence has sparked a debate about its impact on the future workforce.
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some express concern that automation will lead to widespread unemployment, I strongly agree that AI will ultimately create more opportunities than it displaces.
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is because technological progress, rather than being a threat, will provide new and valuable work for the global workforce. Admittedly, advanced technologies do automate many repetitive tasks, potentially making some jobs,
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as driving, obsolete. The introduction of self-driving cars,
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, could lead to a decrease in demand for human drivers.
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,
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perspective overlooks the new
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that emerge from the very development and deployment of these technologies.
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, technological progress is a powerful engine for job creation.
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, the design, maintenance, and oversight of AI systems require a highly skilled
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force of engineers, data analysts, and ethics specialists. These
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not only require technical expertise but
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the ability to solve complex challenges and ensure that algorithms operate fairly.
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, as machines handle routine work, humans are freed to concentrate on
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demanding uniquely human qualities like empathy, creativity, and critical problem-solving
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skills that AI cannot replicate. In conclusion,
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the transition to an AI-driven economy will undoubtedly cause some shifts in the job market, the benefits of automation will outweigh the drawbacks. By generating new
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in technology development and freeing up humans for high-level, creative work, AI will ultimately enrich the workforce and support a more innovative society.

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Check tones and keep to one side, not too much shift in idea.
Strength
Clear view that AI will bring more jobs.
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Good examples like self driving cars.
Idea
Field of new work such as engineers and ethics people.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence
  • create
  • eliminate
  • jobs
  • future
  • agree
  • disagree
  • opportunities
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • assist
  • tasks
  • complex
  • creative
  • growth
  • industries
  • support
  • maintenance
  • training
  • marketing
  • openings
  • history
  • technology
  • transformations
  • manual jobs
  • improved
  • living standards
  • education
  • training programs
  • adapt
  • valuable
  • market
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