The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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what causes reduced productivity on farm lands worldwide and
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impact on 3 different countries in the 1990s.
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, over-grazing was the major cause of decreased land fertility in all nations, especially
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Oceania. Europe was highly impacted by all three factors,
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over-cultivation, deforestation
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the reason mentioned earlier. North
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saw the least of their impact.
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35% of agricultural lands were less productive globally
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of frequent grass feeding by animals,
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proportion was just 1.5% in North
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as compared to the other two nations
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experienced higher rates. Even though continuous felling of trees brought about
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minimal damage
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fields in North
America
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(0.2%), that was the second major reason for land infertility in all the regions. Moving ahead, frequent planting and harvesting did not occur in the large group of islands
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, 3.3% of North
America
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's fields were affected
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Europe experiencing only 7.7%. Other phenomena were responsible for 7% of
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negative effect on the grounds.

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