The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annyl income in 2007,2011,2015.

Overall

Linking Words

, the chart shows a clear

differences

Fix the agreement mistake

difference

show examples

between the categories .

some

Fix capitalization

Some

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things increased a lot ,

while

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others went down or stayed almost the same. We can

also

Linking Words

see that a few categories always had the highest number ,

while

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others were lower during the whole period. These changes help us understand the main trends and how things

changed

Verb problem

have changed

show examples

over

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

time .

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Aug 8, 2025

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

64 words

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