The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

The line graph presents the changing rates of three different crimes in Panama City between 2010 and 2019.

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, the total number of

burglary

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considerably decreased,

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that of car theft and robbery fluctuated throughout the period. In terms of burglary,

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this

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category accounted for the highest number of cases in the first four

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, it dropped significantly from approximately 3400

incidents

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in 2010 to 1000

incidents

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in 2015.

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was followed by a slight increase of 500

incidents

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in 2016 before remaining relatively stable in the following

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. Meanwhile, car theft rates remained unchanged in the initial three

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, at around 2800

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fell slightly to 2000 in 2013.

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, car theft grew gradually from 2000 to 2750

incidents

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in the final five

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, making it the most significant crime in these

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, robbery not only recorded the lowest rate over the given period but

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fluctuated.

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figure experienced a minor oscillation from 2010 to 2019, ranging between 500 to around 900

incidents

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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