the line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

the line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The linear chart displays the percentage of
household
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recycling from 2005 to 2015 in the
UK
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, France, and
Germany
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.
Overall
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,
Germany
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and the
UK
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house recycling had a considerable growth throughout the recorded period.
Whereas
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, France households showed a dramatic fall in recycling rates.
To begin
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with, in 2005
Germany
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's house rates were 20%
while
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the
UK
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was more than 30%.
Then
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,
Germany
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's
household
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percentages had a sharp rise to 30% but
on the contrary
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, the
UK
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increased to 40%.
However
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, it remained stable until 2009, when it grew dramatically to more than 50% in 2011,
whereas
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Germany
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also
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rose to more than 40% in the same year.
Finally
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,
Germany
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's
household
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ratio was higher than 50%
while
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the
UK
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houses reached approximately 60% in 2015. In the case of French households, they achieved 50% at the beginning of the period, but it declined significantly to 30% in 2013 before it jumped to 40 % in 2015, which was the lowest
household
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recycling rate among the other countries

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words household, uk, germany with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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