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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the
prooportion
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proportion
 of
first year
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 students who
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rating
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the rating
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 of the
recources
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resources
 for three
cources
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courses
 (economics, law, and commerce), which
provided
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 by the college.
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,
the
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commerce had the highest result,
while
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 economics had the lowest.
In addition
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, these figures experienced fluctuations over the period.
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, the law slightly declined, but
then
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suddeny
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suddenly
 increased. The share of commerce was
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similarly
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 in both
recources
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resources
, at about 95%
at
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 teaching and pre-course information, but
this
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 figure saw a gradual decrease
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 tutor, print, and from other resources, representing about 93%, 86% and 81%. The proportion of law at pre-course information accounted for 72%, which was slightly more than teaching.
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,
this
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 proportion underwent fluctuations, at tutor 76%, at print 70%, and other resources consisted of 80%. Pre-course information
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 economics was approximately 59%,
while
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 the share of teaching was significantly more, at about 95%. The proportion
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 tutor, print and other resources represented 90%, 81%, and 60%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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